Daddy's Companion - One Year Later
Daddy's Companion - One Year Later I was helping in my daddy's lab on a springtime day when sudden premonition made me stop and turn away to see a sparkle in the hall, a puff of smoke and "FOOM"; and...
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Hello Michael, I enjoyed your tale through poetry! Interesting stuff. JanTanLeo
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Michael, You have been hard at work upon the poet's midnight anvil! This poem reads all the better for it - having just read it, it feels like I have just read a scene from a new dragon movie, and I...
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Rich: Thank you. I felt the rewrite was a major improvement, but it's good to hear someone else thinks it's better. I do have "The Leftover Dragon" posted in the Prose forum now. -- Michael
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I love these story poems Michael and found this a very pleasing tale:) Well done.
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Michael, This one puts a smile in the heart. Pure joy and a well wove story. I'm off now to read your prose piece. Thank you for the pleasure of this!! Sarah
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Michael, i do remember this one & I enjoyed the first version. Shall go back and read it again but need to tell you this one shines. Dee
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Jean, Sarah, and Dee: Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed the storytelling. -- Michael
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Hi Michael, I too want to add my approval. I enjoyed the rhyme to this story poem and the meter was perfect.. I have always loved fantasy.. dragons unicorns.. pegasus.. nicely done! Hugs! Silvia
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Sylvia: Thank you. This one needed the rewrite to bring it up to the level of my first Daddy's Companion poem. -- Michael
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BoardFlak, I read the one in your archive and now this one... they are delightful and I look forward to reading more. Regards, Maryse
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Maryse, thank you. Any more will likely be in story mode. I found with "The Leftover Dragon" I was passing the limit of what I could tell in a relatively compact poem.
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How did I miss this one? Great read...thank you Dinah
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Dinah: Thank you. I apologize for the delay in responding - it's been a complicated week.
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